There could be a golden bird in my life too,
could see all the flying colors
of a rainbow...
Light of this life could be brighter
than its size,
your reduced price might make it possible
to buy you at my cost.
Spring could be more beautiful as well
and eventually it could break my myth
of being all alone.
A few golden moments
could get nourish in a dark day,
with the conditional effect of
payment of some of your breaths to me...
And finally I could also project impartial
to the Almighty,
with a firm belief
to the next generation...
Dipak 'Mashal'
nice poem..
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and eventually it could break my myth
ReplyDeleteof being all alone....
Beautiful creation !
best wishes !
good one...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful thought .
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ReplyDeletevery nice.. pad kar acha laga...
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deepak jee.......u can give unconditional effect too....then .....y put any condition......
ReplyDeletethe bird...."golden" ..wanna free.....to fly...beyond....
anyways.....ur effort is praiseworthy....
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DHANYAWAD
nice expression!
ReplyDeletemay ur creative faculties blossom ....to encompass the supreme creativity!
best wishes:)
Nice, sweet and very pure emotions have you. God bless you.
ReplyDeleteAnd finally I could also project impartial
ReplyDeleteto the Almighty,
with a firm belief
to the next generation...
..... so nice!
"nothing is difficult to a willing mind"
keep it up..
I liked some lines very much.. like , conditional...eventually it could break my myth
ReplyDeleteof being all alone. ..
very nice to read this poem
Beautiful thoughts are woven in simple words
ReplyDeletelike chirping in the morning beautiful birds.
beautiful and sentimental thought.... nice one...
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ReplyDeleteHappy belated Birthday.....Deepak jeee....... May God fulfill all ur desieres.....
ReplyDeleteVry very nice creation!
ReplyDeleteFirst Poem..So Nice Composition..congts.
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kehne ko pehle poem hai par hai bahut sundar...
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very nice.
ReplyDeleteattractiv...beutiful poem.
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