Wednesday 23 June 2010

My First Poem on blog..

There could be a golden bird in my life too,
could see all the flying colors
of a rainbow...
Light of this life could be brighter
than its size,
your reduced price might make it possible
to buy you at my cost.
Spring could be more beautiful as well
and eventually it could break my myth
of being all alone.
A few golden moments
could get nourish in a dark day,
with the conditional effect of
payment of some of your breaths to me...
And finally I could also project impartial
to the Almighty,
with a firm belief
to the next generation...

Dipak 'Mashal'

22 comments:

  1. and eventually it could break my myth
    of being all alone....

    Beautiful creation !

    best wishes !

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  2. very nice.. pad kar acha laga...

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  3. deepak jee.......u can give unconditional effect too....then .....y put any condition......
    the bird...."golden" ..wanna free.....to fly...beyond....
    anyways.....ur effort is praiseworthy....

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  5. keep it up.......Bahot Sunder
    Mera blog padhkar aap sarahenge to hume khushi hogi
    http://anupamaawati.blogspot.com
    jarur padhiye
    DHANYAWAD

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  6. nice expression!
    may ur creative faculties blossom ....to encompass the supreme creativity!
    best wishes:)

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  7. Nice, sweet and very pure emotions have you. God bless you.

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  8. And finally I could also project impartial
    to the Almighty,
    with a firm belief
    to the next generation...
    ..... so nice!
    "nothing is difficult to a willing mind"
    keep it up..

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  9. I liked some lines very much.. like , conditional...eventually it could break my myth
    of being all alone. ..
    very nice to read this poem

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  10. Beautiful thoughts are woven in simple words
    like chirping in the morning beautiful birds.

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  11. Happy belated Birthday.....Deepak jeee....... May God fulfill all ur desieres.....

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  12. First Poem..So Nice Composition..congts.



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  13. kehne ko pehle poem hai par hai bahut sundar...

    mere blog par bhi sawagat hai..
    Lyrics Mantra
    thankyou

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